Blog #11

When constructing our final script, we have made some changes to the final product regarding the story telling. Before, we wanted to have the film end in Caroline killing her father and the police lights showing on her face, and we have since decided to omit that part. Ms. Biferie said that it completed the narrative which was not supposed to be done, so we are going to tweak the film slightly to leave viewers on the edge of their seats more. We haven’t gotten that far into the script yet, but I think we could possibly end the film with Caroline’s dad walking in and asking her what she’s doing. By ending our film like this, viewers can imagine a variety of possibly scenarios to occur after the film is over, such as if the dad would kill her, if she would kill the dad, or if they’d possibly talk out their issues and fix things. However, due to their personality traits, the last one is unlikely. I am concerned about how we are gonna work out that ending, and if we do my idea if it is leaving enough room for thought. I’m proud of how we are incorporating color in our film, with the flashback and paint colors. I think it is great indication to the audience about the mood of the current scene, and will allow for a great plot twist.