Blog #12

As my group constructs our final script, I can foresee some aspects of our final product that might be altered. Specifically, I think that we will change the ending of our film. Our instructor said that we shouldn’t finish the narrative, so maybe we can change it to finish with less details revealed. The ending is supposed to be with the police lights flashing on Caroline’s face. This leaves suspense, but honestly I agree that it reveals too much of the narrative. Perhaps we can instead end the film by showing the dad tied up, and leave the suspension to be whether Caroline kills her father or not. Everything else, however, is secured to stay in our final script. If we run over the two minute maximum, we will have to eliminate one of the flashback scenes.