Blog #15

After submitting our final script to our instructor, she gave us some comments on how to improve it. The main issue was just with formatting. We double spaced every line in the script, yet our instructor said we must use single spaces between character names and their lines or actions. Also, we wrote down our camera movements, which shouldn’t be in the script, but instead in the storyboard. Also in our script, we weren’t specific enough when describing the actions of the film, and what was occurring in the current scene. These issues are easy to fix as they’re mostly just formatting.